Critique my Craigslist ad

[Paul Sandhu]

Someone complained and my previous ad was removed.  Here is the body of my current add.  Thanks for you input.

Furnished houses and apartments for traveling contractors with a per diem. Full kitchens with all appliances and utensils. Washer and dryer. Cable tv in every room. Smart HDTV in living room. They come with all supplies. You just need to bring you personal items, clothes and groceries; everything else is there. Larger houses have 2 refrigerators, 2 washers, 2 dryers.



If a motel room is your standard of living, you have low standards and that is your problem. Stay in a motel room with your low standards and problems. Don't call me, I do not want to rent to you. If you want to stay somewhere bigger and better than a motel room that costs you less money, I want to rent you. Better Call Paul. xxx.xxx.xxxx



Houses and apartments are $200 per week for each bed in the house. You and your friends are renting the whole house. You are not renting a room. I rent my 23 furnished houses to working men with a per diem. They are set up like Hugh Hefners mansion.