Please critique my new listing

[Melissa Silk]

Hi,

Well it's finally here! My first STR. I've been reading/listening/learning from BP for over a year and finally felt ready to pull the trigger. Please have a look at my listing and let me know what you think. I value all the input on this forum, and am so thankful to be a part of this community!

https://www.airbnb.com/rooms/8...

[John Underwood]

Quote from @Melissa Silk:

Really appreciating your responses! We included the parking lot photo to show that the rental is in a converted motel. It felt important to show the building. But you think that's not necessary @Bruce Woodruff @John Underwood?

 You could mention this in the description and remove the picture.