Letters of inquiry for owner financing on mobile home parks.

[Joshua Briscoe]

I just sent out my first batch of letters of inquiry for owner financing to mobile home park owners.  I would like to get some feedback.

My info

date

park owner info.

Dear Mr.______________

I am interested in buying your mobile home park at __________________ via owner financing. If you are interested in this query please contact me at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely,

Joshua Briscoe 

Should I add more info regarding what type of cap rate and reasons they should consider owner financing?  

These are all off market properties.