What is a good example of inquirer letter for a property?

[Steven Crawford]

Hello BP, 

My name is Steven Crawford. I am looking for a good example of a inquiring letter to obtain Real Estate properties. I was able to find a inquiring letter at ************ dot com.  However, I would like to find a  better sample.

Here`s the one I found:

Dear Mr. Real Estate Owner,

My name is Steven Crawford and I am real estate investor. I noticed you bought the property listed on craigslist. That area is also an area that I am always scouting for properties. I have a knack for finding really good real estate deals.

Many times I find more than one of these deals at the same time. I only negotiate on properties that have excellent equity and returns. If I can put together the financing to buy a property that has great equity and returns, would you be interested in looking at the numbers?

Please contact me at your earliest convenience so we can set up a time to discuss possible future business.

My number is 619.327.8519. Thanks, and I look forward to speaking with you soon.

Respectfully,

Steven Crawford 

Let me know what you think, or if there are other resources.

Thank you for your time, 

Steven Crawford