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[Gaelan Evans]

I wrote this letter I'm looking to send it out. I'm curious what you guys think:

Hello!

My name is Gaelan and I moved from the midwest to ------------ a couple years ago to enjoy the mountain life. I’m reaching out because I’m wondering if you might be interested in selling your house.

Before going any further I want to point out:

I am NOT a realtor.

I am NOT a rich Californinan trying to buy their 4th house.

I am just a hard-working young man from Wisconsin trying to build a life for myself in -----------.

As I’m sure you are aware, the current housing situation is making it extremely difficult for normal, working class people to find a house. When I moved here it was reasonable, but because of the recent explosion in the market, I am forced to find more desperate ways of looking for a home.

My hope is that you are perhaps an overwhelmed landlord who might be looking to offload a headache.

Someone who is getting close to being in a bad financial situation because of Covid or the rising cost of living.

Someone who has lost all the equity in their home/is worried that it is in such poor condition that you won't be able to get any value out of it.

If so, I’ve been doing a lot of research and I think we can help each other out.

My goal is that by searching off-market, I will be able to find something within my price range and because the market is so high, you might be able to get more value for your home than you would normally.

If this sounds like something that you would be interested in, I would love to hear from you!

I am currently working two jobs, so if you can, feel free to shoot me a text or leave a voicemail with a good time to get back to you and I will as soon as possible.