The property I bought was a HUD property so I had a hard deadline to close in 45 days (otherwise I risked paying for each day I went over or possibly loosing the deal).  

Cash and hard money transactions are what they generally expect.

When you get it rented, its not going to be hard to get a 30 year loan if the property is rented. 

If so the seller will want to close fast.  5 days is an acceptable time offer, but be careful your earnest money will go hard and you could lose it if you don't close.

Do you want to have to work in real estate and hustle hard to try to wholesale and make a few thousand on the front end?

It's hard to weigh in without knowing any numbers.

Seems fair to me for the most part. 5 years on the landlord reference might be hard to verify in some cases.

It is very hard to find deals like that right now, so I am playing safe and keep most of my net in cash.Please don't push so hard with your ideas on cash flow and real estate.

Do you.need to haveadressable(hard wired) alarm system.

Owners are less likely to move generally, and any sign of distress results in them getting a lot of mail, making it hard to stand out.As far as changing your message, it is less about keywords, and more about creating interest.