The wife won't let me "retire" yet and do this full time Based on the sentence above, it sounds to me like you're saying you don't have time to be doing more than one deal because one deal takes up too much time.

Mine is probably full of "run-on" sentences.

You need to understand the relationship you want thoroughly and be able to say it in a few sentences...concisely, to anyone at any moment.

I responded and said I'm a rehabber and I am located in PG county- I may not have been specific enough in that sentence but I have only invested in PG county and then you responded saying "Do you know if these are good areas to invest in".

Here I'll redo you first sentence: "Hi I'm Matthew from Braintree Massachusetts, which is just south of Boston.

Your first sentence sums up my thoughts about this situation pretty well.

Hahahaha, your first sentence Jarred hits closer to home than you might think :) My wife and I think about moving all the time, so of course we went the opposite direction and bought our first house here recently in Medford.

However, on those rare instances I need to send something in writing, my quick cash offer is 1 page consisting of 9 short sentences.

I'd suggest writing a cash offer and put that sentence I suggested in your offer.

It takes a confusing paragraph to say what could be said clearly in one sentence.