This deal showcased our effective renovation strategy and commitment to delivering profitable outcomes.

Other option is get the house delivered empty. 

@Mike Most The Great job on building your equity base and how smart you are to be looking to othe markets, I work with out of state/country investors and help them create passive income with midwest rentals and here's a few things to consider:- Competition is everywhere and only growing in any worthwhile area, so instead of looking for places with less of it I'd focus on building the team that can still deliver results. - The time is always NOW, so many people stayed out of the "fight" over the last few years and now with rate hikes they are kicking themselves because they missed out.

This deal showcased our efficient transaction strategy and commitment to delivering profitable outcomes.

This deal showcased our effective renovation strategy and commitment to delivering profitable outcomes, exemplifying our collaborative approach to maximizing property value through strategic investments.

A professional letter can not only deliver the same message as your example, but also let the seller know why you're better than all the other mailers they're receiving. 

This deal showcased our effective renovation strategy and commitment to delivering profitable outcomes, exemplifying our collaborative approach to maximizing property value through strategic investments.

This deal showcased our effective renovation strategy and commitment to delivering profitable outcomes.

Let market forces weed out those who are inept and are unable to deliver the right product/service.

This deal showcased our effective renovation strategy and commitment to delivering profitable outcomes.