We are looking for a template that we can use to speak investors to 1) exhibit professionalism 2) explain our investment experience and 3) show mission/vision/market/etc. 

Please do not think that I am discouraging you from proceeding, I wish I had your courage & vision when I was 17!!!

Just wanted to say that your vision was nicely executed and great work.

The quote is as follows: PTI Access Control 1 Falcon XT Base unit USB/Ethernet/ 9 pin D-sub I/O -8 Door inputs- 2 wiegand inputs- 5 relay Outputs w/2 AMP on board Power supply & Battery back up1 storlogix standard software1 PTI VP access device- anti vandal keypad w/out Intercom - (1) gated entryLOT 8/16 oashld Kp communications and powerLOT 18/4 oashld Kp communications and powerLOT 18/2 oashld Kp relay and misc.LOT conduit, fittings and boxesLOT freight/ misc. consumables LOT Project Mgnt/ tech install and labor TOTAL $12,010.00 IP Video/CCTV1 16 channel NVR 4TB w/cms and remote Viewing HDMI Video Output8 cameras Dome IR EPOE -4 MP HD 1/2.5” Sony Exmor CMOS progressive scan -1080P picture quality at real time (30 FPS) -2.8MM wise angle lens -mobile apps - iPhone, iPad, Android -70’ IR Night Vision/TDN -Can be used in application up to 2000’LOT UV rated CAT5 CableLOT Camera Mounting Brackets LOT Conduit, fittings and boxesLOT Freight/ misc. consumables LOT Projecr Mgnt/ tech install labor TOTAL $17,860.00GRAND TOTAL $29,870.00Ok... what do I need and what is fluff?

It has helped us: become data-driven (think KPI), define our vision, build processes (to help scale), gain traction within the business, solve key issues making them go away forever, and ensure we have the right people on the proverbial bus or in this case house.I’m confident, this system can help you take your REI business to the next level and I would love to help you in this process.

If you have this romanticized vision of being the old guy with the beat up pickup and dirty clothes going around to tend to his properties, then by all means, go mow your own grass.

I have chosen the route of hiring good individuals on the inside and outside with a vision of a better bottom line when I get more properties, which I am confident will happen.

Maybe they have a vision for the property that you just haven't seen yet.

Nobody here has any vision.

His parents didn't invest in anything (intelligent - but no "vision").