They monitored him until he arrived at Brevard county where he was arrested.Now we just need more people who have been scammed to share and come forward so they can add more charges and maybe snag him again and this time no bond so he remains in jail until going through trial where I'm sure he'll be sentenced for a long time.  

It was a fair response until the last sentence about shooting him a message.

Had to respond to that great first sentence!  

Oh, please, I don't want to hear words "ethical" and "businessman" in one sentence.

They can make restitution part of the sentence, and it will stop her crap from harming people down the line. 

You hit the nail on the head in your third sentence!

What started out with 2 honest and trustworthy professionals ended with both accepting negotiated prison sentences. 

Your broker can’t have both in one sentence.

Finally, you should write with the principle that each sentence should make the reader hungry for the next, each paragraph end in a sort of cliffhanger.

the way I read the sentence is like the following :the non-lender banks are trying to keep the failure out of the public because if syndication is unsuccesful it is good for them because they get an expensive asset for cheap and/or they can resell it again to another gp group ; for the CLO lender they can mix/swap around the debt tranches to someone else. the actual guy that's losing money here is the equity owners of both the equity part such as LP investor and the debt owner such as the junior posiiton.