I especially love the last sentence here "I wont say whether you should continue or drop out, but dont for a second think college will be your saving grace and the only way you will be successful."

If you use Wesley's wording for pets, I'd remove the double negative or reword the second sentence.

@Kashif Quraish generally all they need is a paragraph stating how many units you own, how long you have been involved in real estate, and a sentence on what your business plan is.

Thanks Michael but if you read my post it has 1031 in one sentence.

My first bit of feedback is from your very first sentence.

If you still forget something don't sweat it, just call them back and ask.You have it backwards with the last sentence in your post.

@Daniel M.You seem like a solid guy I would re read what Peter K said above Also you absolutely need to separate contractor from management , Write above sentence 100 times on a blackboardKeep us updated Good luck 

The very last sentence...

Saves his credit and reduces your sentence.

I found a Park on craigslist last year with a very vague description and one sentence.