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8 September 2019 | 6 replies
Cut this down to a 3-4 sentence paragraph and some additional bullet points.
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6 July 2009 | 6 replies
Wish there was a way to move them along fast - but banks and fast dont even belong in the same sentence..Who's the lender?
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2 September 2009 | 9 replies
I know I have made a post, then went off reading other posts, came back to my post as someone has answered it, and saw a word spelled wrong or maybe a grammatically incorrect sentence.
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22 August 2014 | 12 replies
Our preliminary plan is to flip some small ones to build up our pile of gold, then work on acquiring rentals.You'll know I (Trevor) am writing if after every sentence you're wondering if I'm serious or not.
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28 August 2013 | 17 replies
It is important to put the word current into the sentence as current, delinquency and default matter.
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31 December 2019 | 9 replies
WE ARE AFTER OFF MARKET STUFFso your sentence: " Unless you plan on spending marketing dollars and going after off market stuff it probably isn't worth it."...can be rephrased like so: "Unless you are an investor it probably isn't worth it"Aaron... no no no no don't EVERRRR say that again y'hear?
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9 December 2019 | 9 replies
Your post was great until the last sentence.
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7 March 2018 | 6 replies
Just noticed my last sentence of my post did not make sense, please disregard it.