.: A lot of us believed (and still do) and posted in other topics on BP that "crowdfunding" and "real estate investment" were never meant to be used in the same sentence, paragraph, or story.

On form 22A (financing contingency) on number 2 in the first sentence, the buyer's agent crossed out the language "after mutual acceptance" and replaced it with "after form 22B is removed" (the buyer's home sale contingency form).

My husband almost said exactly what you said down to the last sentence.

I have come across a few who would want to invest in new real estate investors but then the next sentence is you have to at least have 4 to 5 properties under your belt, which didnt make since to me.  

Sorry about the last sentence.

I wanted to ask about one sentence in your paragraph.  

But in the same sentence your not being specific with your buying criteria.

In this case, one executor had a life in prison sentence and in the other the executor was an Alzheimer's patient in a nursing home.

You might also consider adding a sentence in the letter about paying the listing agent's commissions, so they don't just put your letter in the vertical file next to their desk that gets emptied each night. 

That is an awesome run on sentence!