Could you guys could critique it for me and suggest some additions/deletions to the sheet? 

Take a look here at this "DELETED TOPIC" over at fanniemae.com.What that means in plain English:If the seller's goal is just to get out of the loan and out of the property, without any net proceeds, and there is sufficient equity to serve in lieu of any down payment, you can refinance the mortgage into your name, and they quit claim at the closing table, leaving you alone on both the mortgage and on title.

You may want to read them or delete this post.

I stopped watching fixer upper and deleted all episodes from my DVR when they tried to say that putting in 3 gfi outlets was a $800 cost.  

Does anybody delete central air from their properties like this?

Delete the request. 

I just deleted about 30 lines of rambling in this post...

It is easy to find the township, section, range of these areas and delete the whole lot from your perspective certificate list.      

Mod this extra post was due to a double bounce in submission so please delete this note and the previous note but please leave my original.

I would delete the email.