Some of the things in your wording seem like things a renter would not care about. I think you should outline your property description differently, nothing about it is very attractive right now. It is somewhat difficult to read through, and has a lot of things tenants won't care about.
Having it listed that it's a newer furnace, the refrigerator and stove are included--I wouldn't care as a renter. As long as it works and I assume it will stay working. Also, saying that major appliances are included--if you are going to rent a home and NOT including a fridge or stove or oven then GOOD LUCK finding a tenant who will bring their own FRIDGE lol...
Also, I don't know why a tenant would care if the fridge is new, or that there's a door wall, vinyl windows, or that the cabinets are updated or the microwave and range/oven are "upgrades." They don't care what was there before, just what's there now. If you were SELLING the house this would be a slightly different story, as buyers would care about updates and appliance ages. I also think having "NO PETS" twice is off putting. It seems unfriendly to me. I get it though, people have pets and apply anyway, but it just seems unfriendly.
Long story short: Show off what you have, highlight the good things that will directly affect them during their tenancy. Also, change the format into sections. Something like this instead:
Brief desccriptions here <Beautiful bed 1.5 bath home with LOTS of new updates looking for someone to call it home!
HIGHLIGHTS:
Close to school! Excellent schools! Close to park! Etc., etc.
FEATURES:
+ Beautiful home with many new updates!
+ TWO Car garage AND two car parking pad
+ Washer & drier included!
+ Motion detector lighting at entrances!
+ Large basement for plenty of storage!
Etc.
QUALIFICATIONS:
Must earn 3 times the monthly rent
No prior evictions or criminal record
No smoking
No pets
Application fee is $25. We look forward to hearing from you!