1) I’d remove all items under $100 and the landscaping/vegetation items. These a things you could walk through your own home and find. It makes you look like you’re asking for a new build, not an existing home.
2) Anytime you mention big items like HVAC/roof. If you’re asking for replacement figure out how much more the home would be with that being replaced and temper your request. (If you made an offer on a 20 year old home with a 20 year old HVaC and the inspector says it only has 5 years left. You knew that before you made your offer, it’s not a surprise. And if it had a new HVAC system they might be asking $5k more.
If you don’t want the property use this as your reason to walk away. If you do, figure how many of these things you’d really fix, what that would cost, and how much of that you’re willing to cover. (Imagine if they had countered your offer at $500 higher, would you have accepted it? Most likely yes.)
As a buyer I might say something like these 4 major items add up to $3,500. I understand it’s an existing home, or older home, so I’d like to ask you to kick in $2,000 toward repairs I feel are necessary.).
Of course as a seller I might counter with, No, please send your cancellation of sale paperwork and I'll refund your EMD. Then what's your play?
Ps. I have a buyer’s inspection of a home I’m selling on Saturday. And that’s pretty close to the response I have planned for anything that was obvious, in plain sight, or as minor as some of the things you listed. If they find something I didn’t know about and they couldn’t have, or safety related then I’ll consider/cover some of it. As obviously it needs to be fixed.