My 1st Yellow Letter - Please critique

[Adam F]

Looking to send this yellow letter to free and clear absentee owners. The goal is to buy their property with seller financing: a little cash up front and monthly payments.

I know most of the example yellow letters I've seen are very short and non-specific: "I want to buy your house - call me" - but my thinking with this slightly longer letter is to weed out the sellers that want only top dollar, all cash and pre-sell potential sellers with the idea of accepting payments for their equity.

Please let me know what you think and any suggestions for improvement

thanks in advance for any replies

Hi Steven,

Have you had it with nightmare tenants, costly repairs, evictions, and all the headaches of being a
landlord?

Why not turn your equity in 2999 S Locust St into a truly passive income stream?

How? As a local investor, I can make you an all cash offer, though most sellers I speak with choose to maximize their profit by structuring the sale with monthly payments over time.

That way, you get a check every month, even if the property is vacant - and all the tenant issues, showings, maintenance and repairs become my responsibility.

Give me a call right now and let’s talk about it.

Adam
333-333-3333

P.S. Call today and in a week you could have cash in hand and that problem property off your back

[Michael Quarles]

Tracking over the last few months indicates that this simple one is pulling the best

This type is a very close second