First direct mail letter- input please

[Maria Mejia]

Hello!

I am starting my first direct mail marketing campaign and looking for some constructive criticism.

- how is the general wording? Going for short and to the point.

- should I add any border or graphics? I was aiming for more personal (but still professional) since I'm not an "I buy houses" business

I will be printing and mailing these letters myself- may outsource after I get things more streamlined.

Thank you for the input!

«Owner Name»

«Address»

«City», «State» «Zip»

Date

Dear «Owner Name»,

My name is Maria Mejia and I would like to buy your house at «Address».

You wouldn’t have to repair or clean anything, I will buy “AS IS”. I will make the process easy, and we can close as soon as you are ready. I will cover all costs such as title insurance, escrow fees, and commissions.

Please call or text me so we can discuss! My cell phone is ###.

Thank you (sincerely?),

Maria Mejia

###

email @ gmail.com

[Shannon Allen]

Looks like a great start!  I would rearrange the "As Is" section.  I will buy "AS IS" and make this process as easy as possible, which means you wouldn't have to repair or clean anything.  We can close....