Feedback wanted on my Real Estate Investment Business Plan?

[Jerome Joseph Gainer Jr]

Hi All,

I hope to put together a group of investors to purchase a short-term rental property.  I've been working on an "online" business plan that makes it easy to share the information about the proposal.  I would love feedback both on this specific property as well as the organization of my business plan from a potential investor's perspective.  The property in question is sadly no longer available, but I want to apply the same principles, analysis, and business structure to another property.  

Please let me know what you think:

Real Estate Investment Business Plan

I would love feedback on the format, information, level of detail, and the actual investment opportunity.

Thanks in advance,

Jerome

[Kody Thompson]

Off the top I want to see all the financials on the property, Total Cost, ARV, Cost to Rehab. DOM in the Local Area. Rent rates in the local area, Comps All the numbers. To be totally honest It looks like you spent a good amount of time gathering all the info which is great. I would just change up how you format the information to potential investors.