Feedback wanted on my Real Estate Investment Business Plan?

[Jerome Joseph Gainer Jr]

Hi All,

I hope to put together a group of investors to purchase a short-term rental property.  I've been working on an "online" business plan that makes it easy to share the information about the proposal.  I would love feedback both on this specific property as well as the organization of my business plan from a potential investor's perspective.  The property in question is sadly no longer available, but I want to apply the same principles, analysis, and business structure to another property.  

Please let me know what you think:

Real Estate Investment Business Plan

I would love feedback on the format, information, level of detail, and the actual investment opportunity.

Thanks in advance,

Jerome