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Jenn St.Pierre
  • Truckee, CA
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Was this the correct wording?

Jenn St.Pierre
  • Truckee, CA
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I recently sent out my first batch of letters for my mail campaign. After I sent, my business partner asked me to get feed back on the wording.

(Dear)

Hello! I'm interested in buying your house at (Address). Would you consider selling it to me? I buy houses in Nevada, Placer, Yuba and surrounding counties. Here are some of the perks for selling to me and not listing with an agent: Pay no commission, we close fast (a few days), we pay cash and we buy houses “as-is”. If you have any interest in selling, please contact me at (530) 270-9169 or [email protected]. Thank you for your time!

My business partner has stated this:

"I'm interested in buying your house" kind of makes me think we are going to pay a lot.

"We buy houses in any condition" makes me think we are going to pay a little.

What do you think? Any suggestions will be greatly appreciated. I plan to send out the next round in the near future and want to make the appropriate corrections.
Thank you!

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