Thoughts on Business Plan Objectives

[Christopher Keivit]

Hi all - I'm a newbie to both investing and BP and have found a ton of great info here so far! I am working on the "Objectives" section of my business plan and would like some thoughts. Here is what I have: "...main objective is to create investment opportunities in the target neighborhoods and support specific community organizations within those neighborhoods. As a result of these investment opportunities, the Company will realize a profit margin large enough to increase target market involvement, while allowing Company ownership to focus on full time real estate investing."

How does that sound? I don't want to say "the Owner wants to make enough money to quit his job" but that is the goal here!