Help Analyze my deal

[Christopher Adams]

Hello BP,

I am very anxious to get my real estate career started! I have been focusing on buy and holds out of state for the sheer fact it is super expensive in San Francisco. I also have connections in other states with people I can trust so that doesn't scare me. Anyway during my day job an opportunity came up and we have analyzed the deal over and over and think its a win. I would like to get your opinions on what you think and how we have structured the deal. Just FYI this is a tough one for us because we can't qualify for a loan of this amount with our salaries. The only option we can think of is the find an investor to help with the 25% down. 

Anyway let me know what you think and we would love to hear your opinions/constructive criticism