Direct mail letter. Can I get some feedback? Thank you!

[Romeo Sison]

Well I am new to this whole RE investment world. I am going to try my first direct mail campaign. Below is the direct mail letter I will be sending out. If you have any suggestions or advice I would really appreciate it! Thank you! ps BP wont let me post my phone # or e-mail address in the forums.

Hello!

My name is Romeo Sison. My girlfriend and I are new to town. I work for Costco and she works with kids. We recently moved in to the Park Village Townhomes Unit #64 which makes us neighbors. We are looking to buy a townhome/condo in the complex. If you are ever interested in selling your townhome/condo or any other property I would love to chat with you about it.

You can reach me on my cell phone.  Call or text me at (PHONE NUMBER)

Or e-mail me at (EMAIL ADDRESS)

Thanks for your time!

Your neighbor,

Romeo & Tabatha (hand signed)

Cell: (PHONE NUMBER)

Email: (EMAIL ADDRESS)