Newbie Real Estate Investor Here!

[Kevin Gonzalez]

My name is Kevin and my brother Alex and I work in the healthcare field as a registered nurse and upcoming physician assistant! We love the idea of investing in our futures through real estate and we have both been listening to the Bigger Pockets podcast and reading the Bigger Pockets books as well! 

In my first post here on the Bigger Pockets forum I would like to ask for the help of an experienced investor! In particular, someone who wouldn't mind providing feedback over a mailing letter that I have created and plan to use to acquire my first mobile home property. I plan to mail this letter to roughly 25 distressed mobile homes in order to acquire a profitable fix and flip.The letter is attached below.

Best,

Kevin Gonzalez

Physician Assistant Student

& Real Estate Newbie