Sent out my first Mailing campaing

[Jose Tamayo Jr]

Hello Everyone,

So I sent out my 1st hand written letters this past weekend to some tax lean, and others where properties that I wrote down while I was doing the Driving for Dollars.

So I have an issue I have received a few calls to my google voice phone number that was on the letters. But the problem is that I have a full time Job that they don't allow too many calls. So I set up a greeting explaining a bit about the business but no one has left a message? I am not sure if my message explains the business well or they are simply not motivated caller? 

I'm worried that my pre-recorded (screening) message might be deterring potential sellers away?

My message says something like this

"You have reached Jose, If you are calling in regards to the letter I sent you... this is what we offer: *Buy all cash, *Close at your convenience, & buy as-is. if you would like for us to call you back please leave a message with your name, address, asking price, and reason why you want to sell...ETC..." 

What do you guys think about this?

Should I not be screening callers like this or should I simply pick up the phone and go outside and hope not to get in trouble at work?

Thank you in advance.