Looking for feedback on my gameplan

[Antonio Raimondi]

Hello all, 

I am a recent college graduate in operations management and am passionate about building my real estate portfolio. I have somewhat of a game plan for how I want to reach my goal; which is $30,000 a month in revenue. I want to accomplish this by either owning commercial real estate like storage units, large apartment complexes, or both. My short-term game plan is to pay off my student loans first and then begin saving up money for a down payment on a single-family home to rent out. Should I look for different routes like fundrise or any other options? Or does this sound like a good goal to set for achieving my long-term goal? 

Thanks, Antonio