Defining a Company Mission Statement

[Justin McFarland]

After reading the book "Start With Why" I can up with this mission statement. What do you guys think?

Manors of McFarland is dedicated to improving the lives of everyone involved in our company, family and the community through trusted relationships, sharing knowledge and putting clients first by investing in real estate and rental management to maximize profits without sacrificing integrity.

I currently own two rental properties with plans to manage 3 more this year from friends moving to build passive income for future investments.