Should I simply email them or is there an official template that I should follow?

I’d follow those suggestions.

If you are proposing something else then I am not following.

Many have posted a few great tips already, that's the cool thing about this forum ;-)That said, I highly recommend using the awesome tools provided here on BP to learn the basics of analysis and underwriting.A few tips to get started and your continued learning:Find and connect with other BP members that are in your area.Set up keyword alerts to be notified of the topics that interest you.Read Beginner’s Guide.Check out BP Podcasts.Find upcoming real estate events and meetups near you.If you'd like to tag someone in the conversation, type @ followed by their name and then select the name of that person that appears below the comments box.

Does anyone follow it this way?"

Most agents choose a brokerage based on the following criteria: culture, economic structure, technology, training, and support.

@Mike G....if you went to the bootcamp and you follow that model...you know this is a bad buy.....unless this is in california or somewhere where the land is easily worth more than what your paying...but im not a speculator or in the raw land business....so my advice is very limited.Advice....i would throw this deal in the trash and keep looking for other parks....keep them in your Rolodex of follows up's...but follow up in like 6 months and if they still haven't sold it to someone and haven't come down to real world prices..then just call them back in another 6 months.  

So many people are being led into the home flipping business and have tons of gurus teaching on lead generation, follow up and closing deals.

You quickly learn which ones want to talk for ever and which ones just have something quick to say.If it is important or a real problem I can call them back.If it is a repair issue I then text my handyman or HVAC guy to go fix the issue and it only takes me a couple minutes to deal with a issue.I then follow up with the repair person to make sure things are taken care of.

First off, I highly recommend using the awesome tools provided here on BP.A few more tips to get started:Find and connect with other BP members that are in your area.Set up keyword alerts to be notified of the topics that interest you.Read Beginner’s Guide.Check out BP Podcasts.Find upcoming real estate events and meetups near you.If you'd like to tag someone in the conversation, type @ followed by their name and then select the name of that person that appears below the comments box.