The last sentence states that if the title company depended on the statement, which they will say they did if there is a problem, that the seller is responsible for all costs. 

Otherwise focusing on an single sentence in the beginning of the message body may do you the most good.

@Brad Stallings Well, I was going to tell you what my recommendation was but you answered your own question with your last sentence.

I would challenge you and your wife to rethink that first sentence.

I couldn't agree more with your first sentence, where you say "We get so busy trying to build wealth not realizing that our health is the most important thing in allowing us to achieve this goal." 

Inexpensive and plumber do not belong in the same sentence. 

I just read through like 10 listings in an area I'm looking to buy a flip home in and like 7 of them were written in all caps and no paragraph breaks lol.Do agents know that all caps for like 13 run-on sentences is impossible to read???

two sentences earlier you said you are buy and hold?

My framework is going to be: the name, address and or phone numberdiscipline, a few sentences about your experiences and what you would write them on a scale of one to five stars.Thank you so much.

I stopped reading at the second sentence.