Obviously it would  be much more elaborate and formal than just a couple sentences, but should I be trying to use any additional standard? 

I apologize for the poor editing...a couple sentences are missing phrases like "yard would look good", "pressure wash concrete", "architecturally balanced appearance meaning its not hideous looking", and maybe a sentence like, "How hard is it to solder a couple copper pipes in the basement to replace ones stolen...no it isn't Detroit, Josh but it you can see it from here (just kidding)".  

Anytime there are two sentences used to describe an "investment", and the key word in each are "break even" in one and "hope" in the other, that's not investing...that's speculating.  

The key word in that sentence "IF"  LOL

I'd be curious to hear your take on the Raleigh market sometime...I hear it in the same sentence as Columbus pretty frequently. 

In one sentence, what's the worst mistake you made on a fix-and-flip investment?

In the same sentence he expresses that he is hesitant to sell because of getting hit hard with taxes.My question is do you have any suggestions on a deal I could present to him of how to make this a win-win for both parties? 

Her sentence was to loose her child care license, not be around kids other than her poor sorry kids, and to be registered. 

I mean you really can't put south pas in the same sentence as Pasadena and Monrovia.  

Most often yes, they DO have a sober living component because that is key to having residents as a half-way home as most of the inmates coming out have a drug component to their sentence or background.